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Friday, June 11, 2021

First Draft - Mahuika Show

 Draft Writing - use your plan to help you with your writing.

In the begihhing sissy was mesin a rad and was planing wis not odere wan and she was para to Bain kahu potar  mlddil kahv was a fivr god and hee was the last fiyr god and his masr got a cris andshe codit getat so kahu sed their is a big puo keko and the puo keko and he had a bet beck

last and the puo keko hada crist beck and it was his musr tat gaf puo keko a cris and it britc his beck and twist 

Next steps

  • Re-read each sentence - does it look right? does it make sense?
  • Full stops and capital letters
  • Correct your fast words


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